By Thorsten J. Pattberg for the Saker Blog
In medias res is the literary device to start your story “in the midst”. This trick will create in the minds of the audiences the illusion of distance to a beginning and an end. As in: They are throwing you in the middle of it.
All epics – from Homer’s Odyssey to Aśvaghosa’s Buddhacharita to the anonymous Beowulf – are necessarily written in the mode of in medias res. That is what makes them epic.
But it can be done with every story, and with every part within that story. A trained propagandist can and will use in medias res to make any character epic, any story epic, any news piece totally epic.
In this concise chapter, we shall talk about how to write extraordinary distance into any event, thing or character with the intent to deify them – to make them appear god-like.
This lesson is going to knock you over the head, so please find a quiet place and sit…
From Epic Poems to Modern Media
Once this “in the midst” device is repeated in first, second, and third-slot stories, an extraordinary depth is created. This can be cycled indefinitely. The readers are confronted with the extraordinary experience of “reading something backward.”
You may have heard this in grammar school, when your English teacher read a commentary which stated in passing that the Iliad or The New Testament were actually written backward. And you probably didn’t pay much attention.
In literature, we call this ‘the backward-building technique’ or ‘backward linearity’, but this is really misleading terminology, because we cannot write backward, obviously. We just never start at the beginning. So we later relapse, flashback and remember. In editorial work, scholars call this ‘intertextuality’. This is just another sophisticated word for saying we are experimenting with narrated chronology and non-linear order. Yes, we do that for you.
This “reading it backward” is the addictive habit those magicians with 6-figure salaries in Tinseltown use in order to get us hooked for eight consecutive years on Game of Thrones or The Walking Dead and other infinitely epic crap.
The new epic story tellers write stories within stories, endless weighting, say a modern King Arthur, with new deeds and twists and fatalities, introducing ever more interrelated characters such as the adventures of Sir Lancelot and Sir Galahad and Wizard Merlin, and ever more backstories to the new Holy Grail and Camelot, and it just never ends and goes on and on, with new, multilayered deaths and rebirths and [a new stylistic device:] subverting expectations.
You will think, by watching or reading these, that those stories and characters are far more epic than you and your small life. It is a demonic technique, so please do warn your kids…
Those publishers and studios do not roll dice. Writing is a science. They know exactly what certain techniques are doing to your brains. You – I mean “Us” really – are all experimental rats to them.
Epic poems existed for thousands of years, long before writing emerged. They were orally transmitted, and only later written down, such as the Nordic Valhalla mythologies or the Hebrew Old Testament or the Vedic Ramayana. This means that in medias res has an evolutionary psychology explanation.
When our ancestors met a new member or a new situation about which they did not know the backstory, they were excited to know more about it – but also alerted.
If our brains find themselves “in the midst” of something, with information missing as to why and how it got here, neurotransmitters respond and release chemicals that contribute to the excitation of adjacent neurons like a cold flow. It feels like you were in free fall. Of course, the brain will quickly counter the excitation by signaling molecules that inhibit the neurons.
Because if the brain doesn‘t do that, or if the receptors wear out and if the inhibitors can’t inhibit any more, we end up with seizures or in epilepsy. And this is precisely what modern media wanted to test on us: we were fixated onto a giant excitation experiment and they drove us to our limits of the neurological possible. They wanted to measure attention span and frequencies and all that. And now they know.
From Modern Media to Social Media
Let us describe the evolution of in medias res. Epics were usually about the rise and fall of families, so lots of characters and hours of plot, intrigues, endless drama and interesting deaths. Fantastic journeys were also very popular.
In writing for moving pictures, trained writers can easily shorten and cramp hours of plot into 120 minutes or 90 minutes (what we call movies), next 60 minutes or 45 minutes (what we call television shows), and later just 30 minutes (what we call episodes).
To the surprise of the producers, audiences respond to the in medias res technique, not to the actual content. In other words, the audiences were conditioned toward backward-building techniques – no introduction, lots of flashbacks, cliff-hangers, different subplots, constant flow of new characters, fatalities and deaths.
So, producers and writers could condition the experimental rats, Us, with just half of the actual content we thought we needed. If we look at Japanese One Piece, now over 1,000 episodes, or American House of Cards, slightly over 70 episodes, we have 30 minutes or 45 minutes run-time respectively, but with each actual episode just making up 15 minutes. The rest is for illusion – in medias res intros, flashbacks, breaks, close shots, long pauses, unnecessary exterior shots and pointless dinner scenes.
For a scriptwriter, 15 minutes is still too long actually. That is 2,000 words of dialogue or 10 – 16 pages. For comparison, the Book of Tao, which comprises the entire universe, is 4,000 words. At most, I would say a major plot moment is about 1.5 pages of writing. So the scriptwriters must litter the script with several subplot moments and call them A, B, C, D… and so on. In other words, they write backward.
Their audiences feel they are thrown at distance into a long existeth universe, and (mostly) have no idea that that universe has not been written yet (think of George R R Martin’s A Song of Ice and Fire that took him forever to rearrange). And some universes will probably never be completed at all (think of J R R Tolkien’s Middle Earth or George Lucas’s Star Wars saga). We are thrown into something and only later might they bother to tell us what it is. Here is a hint: They don’t know yet themselves. It is just a psychological trick – in medias res.
The epic Ramayana (5th century BC) had 71 main characters. The Chinese epic Outlaws of the Marsh (14th century) had 108 main characters. The Lord of the Rings (1954) has 750 named characters. Anpanman (1988), a Japanese animation show, has 1,768 characters. But all those characters were invented long after you had read the first chapter. You are now going backward into their stories.
You can see this with big producers such as Marvel Comics, a US-company specialized on superheroes, that has come a long way since its first publication of the Human Torch in 1939. The company worked its way backward, as all epic storytelling does, and furnished its universe with over 1,500 superheroes and villains, including the glorious 3D-Man who popped out when you crossed your eyes or put on holospecs, the abominable Siamese twinhead Bi-Beast and, my personal favorite, the emerald-green tomb-god Rama-the-Tut.
So we are going to best every character, every scene, and cause ever more in medias res moments. Then writers moved away from epic novellas and movies and tv series to ever shorter media.
Did you know that advertisements are perfected in medias res moments? An advertisement needs no introduction. It comes out of nowhere. The idea is that you almost feel assaulted and caught “in the middle of something” preferably whilst in the middle of watching another “in the midst” middle part of an epic tv series that they have no plan to end. You are spammed 5 to 20 seconds, and then they just leave you at that. And you have to work your way backward as to what just happened.
From Social Media to the Metaverse
The average Youtube video duration once was 10 minutes to 5 minutes, now even just 3 minutes. That is easily outrun by 30 seconds Polemixs, 10 seconds TikToks or just 6 seconds Vines. That is about the length of 18 words, two lines of verses or exactly one stanza of any 2,000 years old epic poem. See, I told you to sit…
The underlying technique is always in medias res; we are just being thrown into the midst of a new part, over and over again.
We have said that in medias res has evolutionary relevance in our psychology. This is actually how we construct our own epic life story. We were constantly confronted “in the midst” of a new situation, and had to work our way backward to figure out its greater meaning in our own universe.
This is where the neurological technologies of the future will play a greater part in all story-telling. We have managed to actually have people sit on a sofa and do nothing but zapping or clicking – in medias res – into thousands of unrelated new story-lines each day. We simulate to their brains an epic multi-life story. They actually lead multi-lifes with no beginnings and no ends.
The next step for our producers and writers will be to facilitate audiences with endless, infinite streams of in medias res, which some feudalistic cyberspace monopolists have already laid their hands on and patented as ‘the Metaverse’. It really is in medias res. They are going to deify and multiply our living psychology.
So what is the moral of the story? The moral of the story is that the more powerful you want to make your story, and the more interesting and epic and memorable you want to make your characters, the harder you must strike in the midst and work your way backward…
The author is a German writer and cultural critic.
“The writing style is so realistic and fake at the same time it‘s mind blowing but my grandpa died.” –Grimmer
- The Menticide Manual – Foreword + Start Early
- The Menticide Manual – Quibbling
- The Menticide Manual – Gaslighting
- The Menticide Manual – Ghosting
- The Menticide Manual – Framing
- The Menticide Manual – Inverse Reality
- The Menticide Manual – Stupidiocracy
- The Menticide Manual – Perseveration
- The Menticide Manual – ‘The Second Subjunctive’
- The Menticide Manual – Wokeness [or: Euphoria]
- The Menticide Manual – Red-Pilled
- The Menticide Manual – Astroturfing
- The Menticide Manual – Deceit
- The Menticide Manual – Blackpill
- The Menticide Manual – Promiscuity
[…] and – hopefully not many – more creepy propaganda techniques exposed.
How people reacts to Metaverse
Friday Bar on Wall Street.
Fridays headline on Zero Hedge:
War in Ukraine and Taiwan will crash western markets.
Global hot spots could turn into war as things escalate in Ukraine and the South China Seas.
One of the dangers is a US task force steaming toward Taiwan. China may swamp each US carrier with multiple missiles, and each carrier has a crew of 6000, the American population will loath to loose.
Ukraine has also become a major flashpoint. Historically Ukraine was one of the NAZI roads to Moscow, and it will never be part of NATO, even though NATO is trying to annex Ukraine.
Ukraine’s military are not expected to last long against Russia, and the US has instructors on the ground in Ukraine.
The US plan is for Putin to actually take over the now corrupt and bankrupt Ukraine, as the US believes that Russia can’t afford these costs when under Western sanction.
However, raw materials and commodity trade between Russia and China, and their newly formed CSTO alliance may well prove the US and EU wrong.
Last week’s revolution in Kazakhstan was a provocation from the US in reference to Ukraine.
However it soon turned into a show of force by Russia quickly rallying CSTO allies to restore order.
And what if Iran, encouraged by Xi and Putin, decides to go hot in the Middle East?
Any hostility will absolutely trigger a massive flight out of Dollar assets and into Gold.
Forget Crypto-currencies.
Electrical Power for computers may end because of war and thus make crypto holdings disappear.
Comments in the Bar:
Thoughtful trader: A Coordinated attacks on Taiwan and Ukraine would leave the US completely paralyzed.
Young Marine: Year: Washington would be paralyzed and mandate all US forces to take the lethal vax.
Senior Marine: With a Simultaneous attack on Taiwan and Ukraine, Biden won’t know whether to crap his diapers or pee in them. It will take him days to figure it out.
Luckily it will all be over in 48 hours. If it goes nuclear, it won’t matter.
Millennial trader: If you wear your COVID mask you won’t get radiation poisoning.
Young Trader: How much can the market drop if a few aircraft carriers go down with the fishes?
Experienced Trader: You mean losing a shooting war and not because of their own incompetence?
Well Markets would drop considerably (50%?), but more importantly, it would be the end of the Dollar’s world currency status. Instant hyperinflation in America.
Drunk Sailor: Hey Man! The Navy could do worse: like capsizing, colliding into a few of our boats while running away, forgetting to airlift the CIA muppets on the ground, and they are left to get beaten by locals.
Drunk Senior Trader: Markets ALWAYS ignore geopolitics. STONKS MUST GO UP FOREVER.
Young Trader: Ehh, Do they have generators for when the grid goes down?
Experienced Trader: The truth?
If all the power went out, Wall St. would price-in “sunrise” and the markets would skyrocket next morning.
Drunk Senior Trader: Greenspan & Bernanke destroyed market fundamentals.
Now move along… nothing to see here.
And BTW, Buy more stonks — On credit!
Bar Queen: I don’t believe anything anymore. I only have faith in my true friend: this bottle.
I actually agree with Schwab who think we’ve struck a happy balance:
You will own nothing but be a happy party member in a Brave New World. He said.
WWII Veteran: The fools who started WW I thought they would have a jolly little fight, swagger around in their ostrich feathers and elaborate helmets, collect a few more medals, and have it all over by Christmas.
The horrors of the war and the century long repercussions were a complete surprise to them.
Our leaders of today are willfully making the same mistake.
Bar Queen: Oh always the same old gloom and doom, now lets get this party started: Cheers.
Drunk Senior Trader: A toast for STONKS Going through the roof on Monday: Cheers.
Everybody Cheers.
Experienced trader whisper to Young Trader:
First thing on Monday morning Short everything US.
Young Trader: What!!
Experienced trader: Schhh You heard me. Do it.
Clever comment. Thanks!
Nice A. Dane! Thanks for that shot… although it didn’t wash down my nausea.
Top-notch comment A. Dane, a perfect example of ‘in medias res’.
An excellent article by Thorsten J. Pattberg, many thanks to the author.
Thank you so much, A. Dane, for this brilliant comment. Yes, your concise script is a perfect illustration of In Medias Res writing style. It works, and I am afraid our mass media will use epic narrative style against us. God bless you! Best!
Tanks to all for the kind remarks.
Special Tanks Thorsten. I may be one of your greatest fans.
My “Brilliance” is nothing compared to your long line of articles on how the western population “has been driven” into ignorance and stupidity, caused by a Rockefeller curriculum implemented in Wester education since the 70s.
I’m just a Country Boy, taught to analyses a text before the curriculum went into effect, whereas you use words and expressions that I don’t even know, giving me the impression that you are educated in Phycology and Media. Please give us a hint of your background.
If such words and expressions are known and used in those circles today, people working in media must be full aware of how they deliberately manipulate public opinion. In my book that makes them complicit in subversion of humanity.
Gods bless to all.
There’s a term I (well maybe I subconsciously plagiarised it ) coined for folks who are easily distracted, Grasshopper Minds. This is what many adults, but mainly young people support, cognitive dissonance abandoned, and so, why not force feed them a never ending cycle of recycled crap that has no beginning or end, even meaning, just a middle as a starting point, short bursts, baffling them with bullshit they can latch onto, identify with in at least one of the 800 characters.
Very understandable as to why many Americans, having woken up to The Giant Ponzi Butt Reaming, are floating around in an opiate induced zombie like state as opposed to living in total denial like their politicians.
Still, the Americans are about a decade from full spectrum psychosis. That honour goes to the Japanese, who from the text, rightly top all the league numbers for mental paralyses. To be fair, 75 + years of subjugation for a once proud nation on your own plantation could understandably do that to the majority of us.
Finally, as my meds are kicking in, and before I bore you to death, in medias res, in the midst, is the personification, embodiment, essence of US Foreign Policy and Israeli YINON Plan.
“…and so, why not force feed them a never ending cycle of recycled crap that has no beginning or end, even meaning, just a middle as a starting point, short bursts, baffling them with bullshit they can latch onto, identify with in at least one of the 800 characters.”
Haha, I laughed so hard. Thanks so much, WTFUD! ;-) Could not have said it better! Can’t tell how often I found myself and my family disappointed, after following a good story-telling (Star Wars, Game of Thrones) for years !!!… when suddenly the writers killed, replaced, disrespected or even re-animated dead characters. WTF! Its feels like being cheated on. It is a kick to the face. They are f**ing with our brains. And we fall for it… every time… because the ‘In Medias Res’ technique works. :-(
Bless you! All the Best!
Muchas Gracias Amigo
Rocky XV & Die Hard X1V are my personal favourites, lol.
The best literary example of what Thorsten is talking about that I can think of is Malcolm Lowry’s “Under the volcano”. Riveting, for all of the reasons that Thorsten mentions.
In medias res technique seems to be really good for disguising or hiding away a fact that producers and screenwriters simply have no original ideas any more, only constant recycling of the same old, same old.
Furthermore, article touches on important theme of shortening attention scans, simplification of popular culture and concomitant dumbing down of population. Having population that is not able to focus and read difficult written texts or even watch intelligent thriller, does help elites if they want to rule by manipulation and demagougery and blatant lies. So it is political.
One will swallow “Novachok” or “Russian invasion of Ukraine” nonsense more easily if ones mind is effectively weakened/tampered with, through constant consumption of short videos, pornography, banal, superficial in medias res movies, TV shows, internet content where all is sound and fury and CGI without any substance, without building of story, characters and so on….
And I am not speaking in favor of some kind of highbrow content, not at all….But between this in medias res thing and PC messaging, Hollywood fare has become almost unbearable.
Igor this is Menticide, it is designed to destroy the ability to think, and it is working, perhaps this is ‘Humane’ Depopulation!
“One will swallow “Novachok” or “Russian invasion of Ukraine” nonsense more easily if ones mind is effectively weakened/tampered with, through constant consumption of short videos, pornography, banal, superficial in medias res movies, TV shows, internet content where all is sound and fury and CGI without any substance, without building of story, characters and so on….”
The Meta-verse will be exponentially more effective in displacing the objective reality and replacing it with a virtual simulation because the Meta-verse will be interactive, there are now ‘crude’ devices with internet connections that will allow you to imagine that you are, in some ways I don’t wish to define, physically interacting with the characters you are experiencing with your eyes and ears! Some will fall in love with the characters they meet, some characters may be designed to simulate love for their subscribers!
It is a brave new World and we haven’t seen anything yet!
I will never see it because I don’t wish to become immersed in another reality but the lure of physically interaction with the characters will be very powerful for many at a certain age, and like many who only want to try a drug just to see what it is like, many will find it hard to leave their new friends once they have met them!
if you think objectively, meaning without self-coloration of agenda interests and egotism, then you can process life-input, be it experiences, memories, ideas of philosophy, biography, all that is available to the human mind.
The processing is the conscious ability to connect varying aspects, details of the above in a way that is liberating finally. Liberating because ultimately comprehension leads to reality, reality arrived at through the activity of the mind. Reality is freedom.
That may be sounding a bit naive, but the basic argument of what I’m saying should be clear; the self agenda personal ego stuff s encouraged via mentacide, as lethargy takes the place of alert awareness, convenience and simplicity that of being awake, of living, striving and honest mental activity, that assimilates and synthesises and makes us human.
If you try to avoid this then in your in trouble simply. You lose love, that’s why, as Love Connects. Now, watch that idea grabbed and run with without sense!!!
But in reality they have never met, and can never achieve much outside the big screen of their reality if they do fall madly in love.
And even at the end of their day they ask what they were here for, and then are virtually buried in a luxury beach resort of their choosing at no cost to them naturally.
If that’s heading up, then i’m heading out.
The menticide articles and comments are rather thought provoking…
Alabama, you see, it is not always what you see that counts, but what you don’t see : this is what I meant in my comment above by the word Reality. This one word frightens people!!
It frightens people b/c it is unquantifiable, it is without boundaries, and through it we and our knowledge are actually capable of endless growth, enlargement, new doors opening, windows, vistas.
What is possible to achieve outside of the everyday screen of so called reality, this has huge significance.
A screen is just that, it hides realness totally, the actuality of all conscious meaning. Technology has stolen the everyday awareness screen, superimposing endless streams of alternative realness and actuality, flooding the mind, the senses, devastating any capacity to develop individual, mind-focussed comprehension and growth.
It’s work and it’s hard but a natural high lighter of truth. Never, ever give up, never, ever give in and head out.
True connectivity, love, self awareness, happiness, success, these have fallen into the hands of the money makers, but suffering and pain are not included in their promises, nor endless patience, perseverance, nor hope with nothing in your hands. If you suffer, buy their next course and think pink, sell your life take a swig of the nectar of some harmless recreational substance and know you are on the right path.. it’s a swindle.👍
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Love
“I will never see it because I don’t wish to become immersed in another reality ”
Maybe we will not have a choice. Getting anything outside VR could be made difficult, expensive, even illegal. Take mandatory vaccination issue as sign of things to come.
Today – DR.DK – Danish radio and TV —
Another example of Murdochian media flatulence from Hamlets rotten little kingdom – Denmark. As their dithering Foreign minister has just been on the Ukraine frontline. Hoho – grunt, grunt!!!
It is so embarrassing !!!! What are these sorry individuals smoking or snorting!!!
Udenrigsministeren havde millioner med til Ukraines militær: ‘Dem, der kæmper her, kæmper for vores allesammens frihed’.. Ministeren havde 164 millioner kroner med, der skal bidrage til at “styrke Ukraines modstandsdygtighed”, da han i dag besøgte frontlinjen i landet.
**Foreign Minister brought millions to Ukraine’s military: ‘Those fighting here are fighting for the freedom of us all’ The minister brought 164 million kroner to help “strengthen Ukraine’s resilience” when he visited the frontline in the country today.
**Министр иностранных дел принес миллионы украинским военным: “Те, кто сражается здесь, сражаются за свободу всех нас
Министр привез 164 миллиона крон, чтобы помочь “укрепить устойчивость Украины”, когда он сегодня посетил линию фронта в стране.
Thank you from the bottom of my heart Hr Pattberg for the lessons you have teached me.
Consumers of literature need to understand that old scriptures and commentaries that we read today in their 100th edition are the result of huge team efforts of collecting, revising, adding and rearranging chapters and paragraphs. Meanings are often distorted in translation to match the prevailing zeitgeist or ideology.
The writings of Socrates and Plato were not even written by Socrates and Plato, but by their organization – a proto-type of a publisher for educational material. They belonged to some kind of pre-Scientology cult.
What we read today as the Greek school is not the result of one or two men and a candlelight, but an orchestrated textbook series with hundreds of scholars involved, with much of the content added years and even decades after they put together their first edition proto-lecture series.
Same with the organized publishing by the Catholic Church and its Jesuits. There was huge editing going on by the hagiographers and censors. Religious sects are publishing houses, and in publishing, you do re-arrange chronology and passages and narratives.
Accurate chronology is near impossible, as the best ideas often come long after the first draft of a manuscript, so changes are made accordingly, which the student will never know.
Modern writers such as RR Martin and his Song of Ice and Fire publish a first novel, wait for mass readers feedback, then incorporate the strangest ideas in their follow up novel, like more gays, more dragons, more female leads, ALL FEMALE LEAD. You saw it! He went completely woke.
It is not what these writers first intended to write. They had to use the psychological ticks and shock and surprise the readers, irritate the readers and break the readers’ expectations. It is pathetic but it is time-proven and it works.
“To the surprise of the producers, audiences respond to the in medias res technique, not to the actual content.”
I am not surprised by this at all. This reminds me of the German writer Eckhard Tolle. He, in his eternal wisdom and as a university dropout, studied all the major religions and sacred scriptures in the world, picked out the best quotes in each, put those completely unrelated quotes together and.. voila: Baloney Cannon Tolle gets invited to Oprah Winfrey Show and sells 5 million copies of his book!
I once was co-editor for a scientific journal. My job was to accept “quality papers” from PhDs who graduated from recognizable universities. It was a massacre.
The science PhDs didn’t bother a final manuscript version because they probably knew editorial would torpedo their initial submissions anyways, according to our university publisher’s formatting and guidelines and the temperature of my feet that day.
I can say with absolute certainty that the final text will almost never resemble the original submission, and I don’t care if it is Albert Einstein himself. There are rules of academic writing and journal editing to follow.
The less experienced PhD submitted their “final manuscripts”, they thought, and are surprised when we demand considerable revisions.
Then we sent the revised drafts off to two or three peer reviewers. If I was mean that day, I sent the paper to a known procrastinator and nitpicker. That meant more revisions for the author, not me.
What PhDs don’t get it that writing and publishing are two separate crafts. First of all, if I wasn’t arranging their final papers I wouldn’t have a job. I am also their BS detector. Because of me, nobody had to read their original BS, so thank me later.
So I rearranged all of them, every submission, even the good ones. Usually, this entails taking the bold research findings and putting it upfront. First paragraph.
It is what it is. The conclusion must always precede the main body of text. The objective conclusion at the end of the text is a repetition of the forgone conclusion. Repeat the big idea at the end of your text!
Also, the introduction is always written last. Only after all is written and said, you write a beginning. These simple techniques will get other researchers to read your papers. Something similar must be going on in the book publisher industry. You must start your novel with a real killer paragraph and set out in the middle of nowhere.
Readers decide in a split of a second if they want to read more.
Very informative, thank you professor! Could you please write a piece on spiritual guru industry in the near future. All these Sadhguru and Deepak Chopra or Tony Robbins who, you know, sell their “Do this 1 thing and you own the universe” awakening seminars and make millions of dollars. Why do people follow these charlatans? That could be interesting menticide! Thanks!
Saerji, I will try that right now. ;)
She began to rise, and as she did the crowd stepped back, and gasped in unison, some fell down but were not trampled. She hovered, perhaps a meter off the ground, head thrown back, long hair trailing like a short cape. Her legs were crossed, as in cross legged, hands palms up on brown knee caps, thumbs a forefingers touching. She was silent but her lips moved and her eyes followed something high in the sky.
There was nothing to see there. She was in the metaverse, and metarealized.
Ok. That was more of a sales pitch for the metaverse. My bad.